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"Not all the Scars are visible nor all of them dissapear within the flow of Time, but they certainly prove we have fought for something that is far Beyond Oblivion"

Awww <3333 this is the first OC from my novel ^^ . Her name is Meridies and her story will be known in the second book from Beyond Oblivion series :D

This is also my entry for =deathofrats contest!

Im not fully satisfied with it... I wanted a mature character and this turned to childish... :( I need to PRACTISE MORE!!! >.< I want mature characters... But I guess that this isn’t so bad for a first try ^^

Meridies / Beyond Oblivion - Me!

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:iconventhor78:
nice =D green

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:iconmazjojo:
This is really nice, I like it. especially for the colors and the xpression^^! great job!:heart:

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:icontsuky-sama:
:aww: thank you dear! <333

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:damphyr: I want to tear through the Wind, run, become a Star, go to You...


Axel: Burn Baby!! <3
... oh noes...
:onfire: OMG!!1!1!one!
:icontsuky-sama:
Thank you so much!! :hug:
I tried hard this time, but next time I'll try harder! :w00t:

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:damphyr: I want to tear through the Wind, run, become a Star, go to You...


Axel: Burn Baby!! <3
... oh noes...
:onfire: OMG!!1!1!one!
:icondeathofrats:
Wowowow the colour selection is stunning dear! 8O
Although she does look youthful, her expression looks sort of pained and wise, which does make her appear more mature? (and knowledgeable:> )
I love her whole ensemble and the expansive bg:heart::heart::heart:

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:iconorlhando:
hmmm [first impresion]

Your work has greatly improved since early works. You have clearly reached a new level in your skills. Gratz 'bout that.

Your technique in hair and wings painting is truly beautiful. The design of the female character is ok too: she's cute and balanced. Nice hands, face, legs, boobs, arms, etc.

It is very nice too, what you did on top left corner. Clever. Clouds... love'em.

Yet there are a couple of things you can still improve in diz. As you told me before, i thought it was gonna be a darker place so she was "shinning in the dark". I'd suggest you if you pretend to leave her as she is, to darken a little bit the enviroment. The second point is, the place where she stands. Should you make it a little more elaborated so it combines perfectly among the other elements in the drawing.

Finally,

La Vita Fugge

La vita fugge et non s'arresta una hora,
et la morte vien dietro a gran giornate,
et le cose presenti, et le passate
mi danno guerra, et le future anchora;
e 'l rimembrare et l'aspettar m'accora
or quinci or quindi, si che 'n veritate,
se non ch'i' ho di me stesso pietate,
i' sarei gia di questi pensier' fora.
Tornami avanti s'alcun dolce mai
ebbe 'l cor tristo; et poi da l'altra parte
veggio al mio navigar turbati i venti;
veggio fortuna in porto, et stanco omai
il mio nocchier, et rotte arbore et sarte,
e i lumi bei, che mirar soglio, spenti.
[F. Petrarca - Sonetto CCLXXII]

Sincerely yours,

Orlhando (space mutant kiss for ya)

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Night and Day will find a way to keep
the Balance true
Let the Sky and Stars be your guide -
the destination is up to you

Symphony X - Communion and the Oracle
:icontsuky-sama:
<33333333333 thank you dear!!! :D
You are right, her expression makes her seem more mature, maybe I should keep those sad eyes on her. And also a quiet personality could help ^^

Im so glad you like it! :heart:

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:damphyr: I want to tear through the Wind, run, become a Star, go to You...


Axel: Burn Baby!! <3
... oh noes...
:onfire: OMG!!1!1!one!
:icontsuky-sama:
(space mutant kiss for ya)

Im so glad that you noticed some tiny details that would help me to improve in future works! Domo arigato!!! :iconhyperglompplz:

'kay let's see...

I must be honest I changed the dark concept (the sunset behind it's more dramatic because she will be tied to it in the whole book. Also it can be interpreted as a Dawn -'cause of the sky colors they are almost the same at those times of day- this also helps too, because she will be tied to dawn too. You'll see when you read my book as beta tester ^^

Sooooo it's up to you what you want to believe~

About that ugly rock, I can't say anything destroy me =.=. I'll try to practice rock painting :giggle:

Thanks for your help, thanks for your macbook, your words and the most important thing
be my friend and take care of me when I was sick :hug:

Love ya dear! ^3^

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:damphyr: I want to tear through the Wind, run, become a Star, go to You...


Axel: Burn Baby!! <3
... oh noes...
:onfire: OMG!!1!1!one!
:iconorlhando:
oh...

one more thing. Remember I told u about a ribbon on the hair?? Like Areis from FF VII?

well then...

love u too.

btw... hope my Mac hasn't got sick with your viruses

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Night and Day will find a way to keep
the Balance true
Let the Sky and Stars be your guide -
the destination is up to you

Symphony X - Communion and the Oracle
:icontsuky-sama:
OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I FORGOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :B
Well, I will remember that next time I draw her ^^

And... about your mac, he is inmune to my flu! I proved that :giggle:
btw your mac and my mac are friends now! I think he is in love with her <33333333

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:damphyr: I want to tear through the Wind, run, become a Star, go to You...


Axel: Burn Baby!! <3
... oh noes...
:onfire: OMG!!1!1!one!

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